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All The Way In

The MacGuffin Series

MacGuffin

There is an honesty to MacGuffin that can't be manufactured.

He carries himself with the quiet authority of a man who has lived fully — through pressure, loss, loyalty, and hard-earned victories. His features aren't polished or curated; they're weathered by experience. A strong jaw marked by discipline. Eyes that have measured risk and weighed consequence. Lines at the corners of his mouth that hint at laughter shared in the kind of camaraderie forged under strain.

Mac isn't conventionally handsome in the cinematic sense. He's something rarer.

His face tells stories before he ever speaks. You see it in the way he listens — brows slightly lifted, gaze steady, assessing without judgment. You see it in the flash of mischief that surfaces just long enough to remind you he hasn't lost his edge. There's beauty there, yes — but it's the kind born from endurance, not ease.

Every scar is a chapter. Every mark earned, not inherited.

He inspires trust not because he asks for it, but because he doesn't. There is no façade to manage, no performance to maintain. What you see is a man who understands both structure and fracture — of buildings, of systems, of people.

And sometimes, when he turns away in thought, there's a flicker of something quieter. Reflection. Calculation. Maybe even doubt. It's in those moments you realize MacGuffin is not driven by ego, but by conviction.

In All The Way In, Mac isn't just a character. He's a force moving through chaos with intention — part builder, part investigator, part reluctant conscience in a world built on shifting ground.

He doesn't demand attention.

He earns it.

Day 9
San Juan, Puerto Rico

Bad Bunny

Mac didn't recognize him at first.

The man stood near the seawall in Old San Juan, hoodie up despite the heat, sunglasses on though the sun had already dipped below the horizon. He was staring at the water like it owed him something.

Mac had just finished an inspection three blocks inland — another foundation sheared where it shouldn't have been. He walked past, boots scuffing old cobblestone polished by centuries of salt and footsteps.

“You FEMA?” the man asked without looking over.

Mac stopped. “Depends who's asking.”

The man smiled faintly at that.

“Benito,” he said, extending a hand.

The handshake was firm. Calloused. Not soft. Not celebrity soft.

Mac studied him a second longer than normal.

“You're that musician,” Mac said finally. “The one they play everywhere.”

“Sometimes,” Benito Antonio Martínez Ocasio replied. “Sometimes they don't.”

The waves hit the rocks below. Rhythmic. Relentless.

“You here for a show?” Mac asked.

“No,” Benito said. “I'm here to see what's left.”

That landed.

Mac nodded toward the inland neighborhoods. “Depends where you look.”

They stood in silence. Two very different kinds of public servants. One with a clipboard. One with a microphone.

“They rebuild fast?” Benito asked.

“Surface? Yeah,” Mac said. “Underneath? That takes longer.”

Benito glanced sideways. “You mean concrete?”

“I mean everything.”

A breeze came in off the Atlantic. The air smelled like salt and diesel.

“They treat this place like a backdrop,” Benito said quietly. “Postcards and beaches.”

Mac looked at the darkened blocks beyond the glow of tourist lights. “It's not.”

“No,” Benito agreed. “It's not.”

A group of teenagers rounded the corner and spotted him. Their energy shifted instantly — excitement, disbelief, phones out.

Benito gave Mac a look that said here we go.

Mac stepped back automatically, giving space. “Guess they found you.”

Benito smiled. “They always do.”

Before he turned away, he paused.

“You ever think about writing what you're seeing?” he asked.

Mac almost laughed. “I just beam it up to the sky.”

Benito grinned. “Yeah. But someone's gotta tell the story right.”

Mac watched him disappear into light and noise — adored, amplified, impossible to miss.

Then he turned back toward the darker streets where the real work lived.

Different platforms.
Same island.
Same storm.

Day 6
Arecibo, Puerto Rico

Inside the Wall

Inside the wall. Not outside.

Back in their room after uploads, Ruben and Carlo were in full swing. Conspiracy hour.

Mac wasn't much for it.

He'd been wrong about Dave. That had been enough of a lesson. Prove yourself. Stay consistent. People come and go. You stick around long enough, you earn space.

“Money, power and toilet paper,” Ruben said.

“Money, electricity and toilet paper,” Carlo corrected. “They have no power because they can't vote.”

“But they don't have electricity either!”

That part was true.

The disaster had taken that. And now thousands of electricians had been imported from the lower forty-eight.

“Pack your shit. Get on a plane.” “Bring everything.” “The whole enchilada.”

Which meant a lot of excess gear. A lot of equipment that might never be used stateside again but could be written off here. Hauled in. Billed out.

Puerto Rico's grid looked like it had been stitched together in the fifties.

Mac knew wiring. He knew panels. He knew breakers. Fifteens and twenties. He'd run lines. Designed circuits. He knew what overloaded systems looked like.

The island looked overloaded before the storm. Now it looked prehistoric.

No streetlights. No porch lights. No stoplights.

Only the big hotels had power. And those were filled with electricians and security guards so the generators didn't walk off in the night.

It felt less like disaster relief and more like low-grade warfare. Guerrilla survival.

• • •

Carlo leaned back on his bunk.

“It's like guerrilla warfare down here. Everyone's trying to get help. We have to separate the scammers from the real homeowners.”

“Everyone has a story,” Ruben added. “My passport was lost. I don't drive. My upstairs is gone.”

“We have to decide who's real and who's full of mierda.”

Correcto,” they both said.

Mac listened.

• • •

Mac didn't laugh.

“Maybe he wasn't scamming,” Mac said quietly.

Ruben looked at him. “I know what PTSD is.”

Mac nodded.

“Think about it,” he said.

He didn't raise his voice. He didn't pace. He just stared at the ceiling and spoke like he was describing a field report.

“Storm starts. Sirens maybe. Maybe not. Wind climbs. One. Two. Three.”

He snapped his fingers once.

“By five, you don't hear anything but wind. Palms ripping out of the ground. Roofs lifting. Walls flexing.”

He paused.

“Second floors tearing off and going airborne.”

Silence.

“Projectiles everywhere. Metal. Wood. Cars. You're in your house while it's coming apart around you.”

Ruben stopped smiling.

Mac continued.

“Then it stops.”

He let that sit.

“Dead calm.”

“Eye,” Carlo whispered.

Mac nodded.

“You think it's over. You step outside. Check your neighbor. Check your kid. Check the upstairs.”

He snapped his fingers again.

“It isn't over.”

“Second half hits without warning. Straight to five.”

The room felt smaller.

“Then a week later,” Mac said, “Seven-point four.”

No one spoke. No one joked. The conspiracy theories had drained out of the room.

Ruben wiped his face without acknowledging it. Carlo stared at the wall.

After a long moment, Ruben said quietly, “Kapow.”

Mac nodded. “Rebirth of the worst firestorm of bullets and shrapnel you'd ever scene. Any poor soul who survived the first round. Who is still alive. Who came out from hiding to assess damage the first time. In the eye of it. Anyone that wondered too far from their makeshift bunker to check on family. Loved ones. Neighbors needing care. Friends. Was fucked.”

Ruben and Carlos were silent.

“Cars and people were airborne over the streets. What's that gona' do to a person? Can you imagine?”

Mac lay back on his bunk. He hadn't meant to say that much.

But sometimes you had to remember what people survived before you decided they were hustling you.

The room stayed quiet. Outside, the hot water generator shut down. Somewhere down the row, a door shut. Rexi barked at the gate and then stopped.

Disaster rearranged everything.

Memory. Paperwork. Ownership. Identity.

In a place where roofs flew off and houses shifted streets, where titles got soaked and names blurred and second floors disappeared into the ocean — proof became flexible.

And in that kind of chaos, a smart man wouldn't need to create fraud. He'd just wait for it to blend in.

Mac turned off the light.

If someone wanted to hide something bigger — this would be the perfect place to do it.

He rolled onto his side and set his alarm. 3:50 would come fast.

Chapter X
4:00 AM AST

It was still dark. Four a.m. Atlantic Standard Time.

Coffee in hand, Mac dragged a chair to Dave's cubby hole and sat down without asking.

“You got five minutes to indulge me?”

Dave didn't look up. “I can take a break from saving the cyber world.”

“You've got general knowledge about buildings, right? Engineering. Foundations.”

“Enough to know when something's wrong.”

“So, what if you couldn't see the foundation — but you knew it was faulty?”

That got Dave's eyes off the screen.

“Explain.”

“You can't see it. Not really. The forms are there. Steel cages. Poured columns. But what if they're only where you can see them?”

Dave leaned back.

“Are we talking incompetence or fraud?”

“Let's say intention.”

Dave studied him.

“You're thinking staged compliance.”

“Exactly.”

Dave nodded slowly.

“Single verification point.”

“One photo slot in the report,” Mac said. “Inspector documents the visible column. Upload complete. No red flag. No second angle required.”

“And no secondary audit unless someone flags it.”

“Right.”

Dave folded his arms.

“That's not a homeowner problem.”

“No.”

“That's contractor level.”

“Or higher.”

Dave was quiet.

“You're asking if someone could design a system that passes inspection but fails structurally.”

“Yes.”

Dave turned back to his screen, thinking.

“That wouldn't be about cutting corners to survive,” he said. “That would be cutting corners to plan for failure.”

Mac said nothing.

Dave added quietly, “That becomes actuarial.”

Insurance math. Not construction.

“Just thinking,” Mac said.

Dave glanced at him.

“Careful where you let that thinking go,” he replied.

• • •

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